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高考英语写作满分范文

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  高考英语写作满分范文一

  注意:

  1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【优秀满分范文】

  Dear Peter,

  Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.

  The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

  Hope to hear from you soon.

  Yours

  Li Hua

  【名师点睛】

  本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务,要点扩充合情合理,符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑:对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化,并没有一直使用陈述句,穿插使用祈使句,符合邀请函的特点。

  文章中使用了较多的复合句,如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate,时间状语从句the last time you visited our school,条件状语从句If you want to join等。全文没有中国式英语句式,体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。

  考点:考查半开放作文

  高考英语写作满分范文二

  假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MS Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

  注意:

  1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。

  【优秀满分范文】

  Dear MS Jenkins,

  I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.

  I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  高考英语写作满分范文三

  假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

  1.表示歉意;

  2.说明原因;

  3.另约时间。

  注意:

  1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【优秀满分范文】

  Dear Bob,

  I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

  Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

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